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Samael

Published: Apr 23, 2017

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Description

I wanted to try something new so here is a quick doodle ( well in fact it took me way more time than it should had ) of my OC Samaël. I really like how the colors turn out !

As always, every comments are welcome and really appreciated <3 Don't hesitate to give me critiques as long as they are constructives !

Image size

1700x2289px 1.02 MB

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Kale-Chaaan

Apr 23, 2017

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Impact

The shading on the image is really smooth and in the right places. I believe there could be a bit more shading under the neck, as well as behind the nose.
For the proportions, his neck seems a bit too long and his shoulders are to curvy to be a male's (unless that's just your style.) The overall shape of the face is correct, but I believe in this pose you would see his ear, unless his hair is meant to cover them. For the collar bone lines, I don't think that could be a bit lower on the chest.

Overall, I think it's a nice piece.